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Kim Ho That was a pleasant read and definitely worth the full 150 xp — given the life-cycle of elves, however, a great grandfather’s great grandmother would truly be ancient (almost a figure of myth; certainly someone born on the mainland of the empire before the exile of the elves to Curabel). I like that, though, it fits the tendency toward exaggeration with which you’ve imbued Tarion character.
Excellent write up! I like how you did it all in character.
Absolutely brilliant write-up. Really captured the action, and really comical, especially with the narrator constantly being knocked out and lamenting the fact. And lol the ‘HE-elf’ xD
Again, sorry about me not showing up, ‘Mental absence’ indeed! 😛 Hmm… story reason for that? Perhaps he’s overwhelmed by the legacy of his race. Axel is a young dwarf afterall, and would never have seen the like. Might continue to play it that way until something happens to shock Axel back into his normal self.